I've got this wonderful book about all these greek myths and I love it so much The author is so great with words and he makes all the deities/mortals seem so relatable and NOT omniscient and greek myths are just so well imagined that they are STILL RELEVANT TODAY
also PJATO
I plan on illustrating something from each chapter (a myth) of the book So here's the best couple ever omg Orpheus brings the animals out with his kpop sorry I mean greeky music Then he married Eurydice and settled down so he didn't play music as often any more One of his SASAENG FANS hunted her down, she ran away and died (wow smooth move) and Orpheus was like 'aw no way man' and he visited Hades down under (not Australia) to get her back. Hades was all 'aw shucks, yer a real tearjerker ok here's Eurydice she'll follow you but my word is only legit if you DONT LOOK BACK EVER ON THE WAY UP TO EARTH.'
He looked back. everything SUCKS WHY DID IT HAVE TO HAPPEN LIKE THIS BLUBBER BLUBBY BLUB COMMISSION INFO!
Oh gosh third time writing a critique @_@ First off, I will be critiquing you based on this oil-paintish style you have selected to draw, so nothing to style-based or I'll try to keep it to a minimum. I gave you a 4 for vision because I understand mental images are usually better than the actual outcome. But you have a pretty good sense of where everything goes. I gave you a 4 on originality because I do admit this is pretty original, I've seen more original works. The technique is good, but some things can be improved. For example, the yellow background should be more desaturated or more neutral so the centerpiece can capture people's eyes longer. I gave a 3 on impact because even though it's pretty, it doesn't cause me to think about the deep hidden meaning the artist wants to convey or something.
wow to be honest I love your color very much! I love the way you choose colors btw are you a kpop fan , haha i see 'sasaeng fan' there.. only kpop fans know what does it mean.
First off, I will be critiquing you based on this oil-paintish style you have selected to draw, so nothing to style-based or I'll try to keep it to a minimum.
I gave you a 4 for vision because I understand mental images are usually better than the actual outcome. But you have a pretty good sense of where everything goes. I gave you a 4 on originality because I do admit this is pretty original, I've seen more original works. The technique is good, but some things can be improved. For example, the yellow background should be more desaturated or more neutral so the centerpiece can capture people's eyes longer. I gave a 3 on impact because even though it's pretty, it doesn't cause me to think about the deep hidden meaning the artist wants to convey or something.
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